Melancholy Comments
saddness crowned with perfect grace;
desperation and injustice it embrace,
lying on the floor, lost and insecure;
no more negativity i can endure
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Certainly a barrage of melancholy thoughts and personification....well penned yet maybe a little to much honey for some bees.....
I have to say the same as 'Delicate Heart', I got lost in the poem! Just completely taken on! Very passionate poem. A suggestion- maybe add punctuation. punctuation adds alot to the clarity and emphasis to the poem. Just a suggestion! 10+ from me! Paige
It's amazing, one may become lost whilst reading it, very tender poem.
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8/1/2025 3:40:41 AM # 1.0.0
Very sad and melancholy circumstances nevertheless very good poem. keep writing! thanks for the invite. J. L.