Saturday, February 28, 2015

Melancholy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unseasoned rain, full of pain,
Dust: solid and sad: lost reign
Laugh turned to grief; loosing,
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Susan Williams 02 November 2020

Hovering clouds rained and gone, Shining Sun, the hope lone, Dried garments and the soul - - - well written

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 February 2015

Fantastic speculation and nice description. I like this. Many thanks.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 28 February 2015

Beautiful lines. Let the sun of hope shine on after every shower. Good write.

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Gajanan Mishra 28 February 2015

beautiful shining sun, I like it..

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