On the grass, at the autumn scene
Of night, your chest, pillow to sleep
Your heavy breath tamer than subtle wind
And the sun in your heart changed to be the moon maybe
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Deeply beautiful and deeply heart moving! .. Beautiful sentiments! .. My sympathies, very difficult times! .. Ever so beautiful to write! ..
Good night my dear, meet you later, in another world yes dear in another world when you wake up I will be there Somewhere we are not familiar but eternal.....so touching A beautiful poem on empathy nicely executed.
Hmmm. Life and all its tools, organic and inorganic, are they obstacles or illusions! And the other world... The real and unseen. And love and the acceptance of each flower or thorn is ideal to live here. Nice poem.
In your words, Soul, is a tremendous empathy. You deal with the greatest of losses, with profound sensitivity. This is a simply amazing work.
Soulful and deep expression of love and sorrow; the verses weigh on the heart but they are penned so beautifully that the melancholic winds seem to take away some of the grief on a journey to heaven leaving behind a dose of grace and gratefulness for wonderful moments of togetherness gone by.
Part - 2 things ahead in their plan then suddenly their gone. Beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing.10
Part - 1 I know you have written this melancholic windy day poem so touchingly in lieu of your close friends who lost their beloved friends and family and it also happened to yourself too at the same time which really surprising you, losing few friends at almost at the same time is really hard to accept and so devastating especially when you know that they just have a chance to rebuild their life after so many obstacle they had in their life...so many dreams and nice
A heart touching poem, the poet felt and nicely described his feelings.