Saturday, August 15, 2009

Melancholic Feelings Comments

Rating: 5.0

life has given me,
many pleasures,
most things,
i asked for,
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ritty patnaik
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Raj Nandy 20 August 2009

Perhaps without realising, you have provided an excellent explanation in the last para, - reason for this feeling of void within! 10+ -Raj

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Ejaz Khan 15 August 2009

How very true, a lovely write!

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Milica Franchi De Luri 15 August 2009

Hi Ritty! Your poem is beautiful and talks to me like a sister from faraway, who is going true the same emotions as i am and understands me. Kind regards Milica

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