Thursday, August 21, 2008

Melancholia Comments

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Somber winds carrying the news
Of who through the night we've had to lose
Shallow graves dug in the rock laden soil
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Timothy Weiermann
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immortal Butterfly 09 February 2012

Your words always seem to amaze me. As though every time I read what you wrote it feels as though you're talking to my soul.

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Ron Flowers 21 August 2008

This is very good poetry, Timothy. It sounds mature beyond your years. Keep writing. Ron

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Dawn Slanker 21 August 2008

A touching tribute to the memory of your furry child. I believe, whole heartedly, that pets are a gift and that they are here to teach us what love is and how love is supposed to be. I'm so sorry for your loss.

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Anjali Sinha 21 August 2008

awh how sad! ! ! ! ! ! ! I only hope this is in memory of a pet. lovely touchy words Tim. You write beautiful poetry. Great star you will be some day i bet. ++++++++++++++++++++++10000000000000000000000000000 to my lil fren loves anju

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Timothy Weiermann

Timothy Weiermann

Tucson, Arizona
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