Sunday, January 1, 2017

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The cat sneezes
And the cupboards are shaking

Blue, deep blue is the
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Paul Brookes 02 January 2017

Clever write enjoyed the images you conveyed Flowed well and as is sometimes the case poems about the everyday can be little gems. I liked your use of metaphors especially 'I bathe in clouds and clean my eyes' One small typo 'Jewels only have lend the gleam' should be Jewels only have lent the gleam or jewels only lent the gleam other wise perfect thanks for sharing

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