Megha Comments

You have beautifully described rain here in this magnificent poem.... well penned! !

Jhaunli padithiba patra mananku dekha Kemiti aanandare bibhora semane...these lines reveal the coolness of cloud and its lives giving water. An enchanting expression has been made. Beautiful poem.

if you hadn't mentioned " clubbing" (" clumping" ?) i'd never have noticed! ! ! ! ! hee-hee bri :)

i tried as best i could with hammer, saw, and chisel to get the words to break out of their clumps, but to no avail! ! ! bri (:

A fantastic expression has been made by you on clouds(megha in oriya language) astutely. Every line is interesting. When rain comes how the trees do feel is touchingly inscribed here. It may be cited... Hathaat tumeaasila Tup tupshabda karibarsigala Dekha, dekha Eigachha maananku dekha Jhaunli padithiba patra mananku dekha Kemiti aanandarebibhorsemane Kemitishihiri uthuchisemananka tanulata A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

A beautiful poem dear Bharati Apa... enjoyed reading the vivid description of cloud so immaculately depicted in this wonderful work! I would love to read many such beautiful poems from your pen days ahead!