Saturday, September 24, 2011

Meeting Soul Comments

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Sometimes in this lifetime,
we meet a special soul,
who fills our very essence,
to almost overflow,
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Shaikh Haneef
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Sonali Sings 16 October 2011

While you're overseas, And I'm safe at home. I think of you out there, In danger and alone. This is the life you've chosen, And I can't change your mind. You've found your inner bravery, And now I must find mine. I must say...the lines very well framed involving the reader too in the pain felt by the poet to find his strength in the absence of his soul mate.

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Aastha Uppal 25 September 2011

a heartfelt write..Sometimes in this lifetime, we meet a special soul, who fills our very essence, to almost overflow...truly like these lines..so very true and everyone hopes to find this special someone.. but then once found the fear of losing them troubles us.. very beautifully expressed.

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