Friday, November 21, 2008

Meeting Place Comments

Rating: 5.0

I made my way towards the park
Upon the route I'd seen before,
I passed the houses in the streets
And with my head bowed to the floor.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Alison Cassidy 26 November 2008

This is quite lovely, Andrew. You have linked the pastoral with the personal in a very special way and done so with sensitivity and flair. Exceptional writing. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Duncan Wyllie 24 November 2008

You write so well Andrew, that it's as if I'm there with you Now that takes real tallent and passion Love duncan X

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Tsira Goge 21 November 2008

It warmed my heart to think of love And thus forget my foolish pride. .......................................... But sadly now I stand alone. .............................................. Beautiful poems.... And it is a small lesson also for the young.... From senseless pride, a prize only - loneliness. 10......... Sincerely, Tsira

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Tissa Calvert 21 November 2008

it was a very heart felt poem and a good one at that where did you get the thoughts from and or what influenced you? keep the hard work up

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