I made my way towards the park
Upon the route I'd seen before,
I passed the houses in the streets
And with my head bowed to the floor.
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You write so well Andrew, that it's as if I'm there with you Now that takes real tallent and passion Love duncan X
It warmed my heart to think of love And thus forget my foolish pride. .......................................... But sadly now I stand alone. .............................................. Beautiful poems.... And it is a small lesson also for the young.... From senseless pride, a prize only - loneliness. 10......... Sincerely, Tsira
it was a very heart felt poem and a good one at that where did you get the thoughts from and or what influenced you? keep the hard work up
This is quite lovely, Andrew. You have linked the pastoral with the personal in a very special way and done so with sensitivity and flair. Exceptional writing. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥