Wednesday, June 18, 2008

Meeting Of Hearts Comments

Rating: 4.1

A yearning, a lust
To caress your skin, your soul
Completing this circle
Indeed, has made us whole
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Wendy Bureau
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Kesav Easwaran 22 November 2008

Making love and beyond...your write brings in, the ecstasy of souls more than that of bodies...an excellent piece...deeply enjoyed, Wendy...10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 August 2008

i'm fascinated with this meeting of the 'regurgitating hearts'.what a splendid piece.

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Bob Gibson 18 June 2008

the perfect, exquisite, bonding of two people in love, he was your surroundings and you his!

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Jurietta Duraan 18 June 2008

perspiration dances upon skin... beautiful image - and the last verse ties it all together perfectly......

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