Tuesday, March 13, 2018

Meeting Half-Way For A Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

the downward shape of your eyes
the downward shape of my eyes
pointing to the centre of our hearts
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 March 2018

Very romantic triloet! Liked it so much.....Thanks for sharing....10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 March 2018

Stupendous description of the physical attributes of two hearts in love and the inevitable act of love: kissing. Exceptional write. Beautifully crafted and well executed.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 March 2018

your prominent lower lip my prominent upper lip made to meet half-way for a kiss........touching expression. Beautiful poem shared amazingly. Thanks.

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