Monday, February 13, 2012

Meet Me In The Horizon (Ft Vipins Puthooran) Comments

Rating: 4.1

Lift me up above this endless line
Separated away in different dimensions
Our fated life refracted in slightly illusions
That lead us to be lost in hopeless mazes
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2017

Devotion in a song tears us like a rain from heavens For blessings come pour our love from His heavens So here, In this Infinite line we shared the pain Endless touch, togetherness each other, and stay remain... lovely theme. You have done collaborately and have ennoyed collaborately too. It is a beautiful poem with nice collocation. Thanks to you and to Bipins, your pal.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 June 2016

In different dimensions! Nice work.

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Geetha Jayakumar 05 September 2013

Dear Soul your poems are fantastic.. I loved reading it..Definitely I will read Vipins poems too..

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 27 June 2012

Those incessant waves in harmony In the horizon meet me as a crony Rise up from sleep as you live in the dark Open your throat to sing like a skylark a tremendous work put together........pouring lively images! !

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Neela Nath Das 09 June 2012

I always observe that a sense of fraternity works within you.So, nice! Captain has rightly said the harmony of dancing words are really noteworthy.Wonderful message Soul, really!

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Captain Cur 02 June 2012

You both corraborated well together. The words dance harmoniouly with each other on the page, where one stops the other begins, with a wonderful uplifting message to ponder about. Very nice partnership an intelligent and beautiful piece of writing.

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Hans Vr 12 April 2012

Another piece of superb poetry. Very well done, Soul (and Vipins)

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Harindhar Reddy 15 March 2012

Bingo! Earth and sky are separated as you and I By Billions of light years and on earth only tears World has changed only bad to worse As alone - I we live in fears and with as troubles and smears Yes people can achieve anything together but often we choose to stay single in the bingle........ To the poet as lovely Cala Lily! :) :) :)

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Richard McClellan 11 March 2012

Very nice poem, you both work very good together... :) Keep writing...

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First of all let me appreciate the love poured in this work of poetry, you sure know how to dedicate your pen to your paper, you know how to Co-relate you soul to your mind. Your mind to your emotions and your emotions to fantasy.. And in so doing your formulate an inspiration to reality, I love this write, not its rhythmical lines only, but also the deep sensation that seased my emotions and kept me thinking... Thank you guys... This goes to both of you.. (and Vipins) Much Respect The_African_Son

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Shadow Girl 25 February 2012

Wow...AMAZING....god i loved this..u r extraordinary lil bro..BEAUTIFUL -SG

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(De Va) 22 February 2012

your imagery cannot contain itself, you are amazing with your use of words to provide a canvass on which you paint your visions..blessings

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Jacqui Broad 22 February 2012

It's so beautiful that I have tears in my eyes. Something I needed to read and get insparation from. Thank you, it was a great collabaration between two wonderful geniusses of poetry!

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Eric Cockrell 21 February 2012

when stars unite the night sky itself is bowed by the light!

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Jinal Oswal 20 February 2012

Wonderfully done, you guys did workout a masterpiece. Loved it :)

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 18 February 2012

Though the sky and the sea, never hug and touch, meeting at the horizon, mirage of unknown. Nice poem, Unwritten soul..

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Rekha Mandagere 17 February 2012

Soul is thought and Vipin is expression! What a fine blend of thought and expression can be seen here! It is really a great piece of work.High sense of esthetics is smiling here.

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Vipins Puthooran 15 February 2012

********************************* Meet me in the Horizon wherever you are; Sink your sadness down to the sea Rise up your happiness upto the sky When we're in the horizon we can touch both the sky and the earth........... And can share the sadness of a sinking sun or greet the happiness of a rising sun together..... This horizon is a togetherness of our mind **********************************

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 14 February 2012

Wonderful poem) . I like your stile of writing and you way of thinking...that`s one of the best poems I`ve read here

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 14 February 2012

Wooow! ! this is a masterpiece my friend...it reminds me of the old days when we used to go wait for girls at the river.we would watch the sinking sun and sing with frogs, from no where, its like you can hear the echoes of a djembe drum from a distance, like you can hear the sweet sounds of an imbira echoes down the terrain....wow! my friend, this is so beautiful man!

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