Monday, May 25, 2020

Meet Me In A Dream Comments

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Meet me in a dream,
my bittersweet moonbeam.
It's noon, I think of you
and ah...you're farther than you seem
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Nika McGuin
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Khairul Ahsan 01 September 2020

'As the sun rises, thoughts of you fall heavy on my heart.' - A beautiful expression! 'For I'm the one who went away and our distance is growing by the day' - this sense of guilty feeling has produced a beautiful poem. Hope you have overcome the guilty feeling by expiating and the person truly appeared in your dream.

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Tom Billsborough 29 June 2020

Meet me in a dream. A dream of a poem. bip and bob of Jazz tunes. love that line, Nika. Good poem

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Michaelw1two 25 May 2020

Aloha Nika and Cheers! Caught your latest post and took the plunge... Nice word work! You wright? My question... why guilt? read me... I, will to read more of you... All of the best from this life, to you, and to all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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Nika Mcguin 27 May 2020

Thanks Michael! I'll be sure to take a look at your poetry.

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