I am sitting calmly
Straight up on my heels
By the rainbow colored sand dunes
Created by the Martian gusty winds
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A beautiful place to go for meditation. Great imagination and imagery. Thank you. 10+++++
Chris, Thanks so much for your visit and generous admiration of my poem. All the best!
I sense the calm and inner delight you experience as you sit squatting on the sand dunes, your head poised to the Western sky in deep silence! The spectacle that you watch is that of the setting sun when the whole sky is bathed in a red and orange glow! A lovely scene and experience so well expressed through words! A sure 10
Valsa, Thanks for visualizing and enjoying my poem. Your wonderful comments are highly appreciated.
Marilyn, Thank you so much for your visit and wonderful comments. All the best!
A wonderful poem about nature and meditation. Superb imagery.10+++
Rose, It is always good to hear from you. Thank you for your kind words. Have a lovely day!
In first stanza you have inscribed your calmness and blissful meditation and this is the spiritual part of the poem. Second stanza reveals the picturesque view of angelic sunset and serenity of nature. Thus poem on nature and spirituality has been delineated by you astutely and hauntingly. Thank you dear Irfanulla for sharing this gem.10
Kumarmani, Thank you very much for taking time to read my poem and your gracious admiring comments. All the best!
This blissful meditation In the silence Of glorious sand dunes Is expanding my spiritual heart.... your expressions..... angelic sunset.. you are a spiritual poet and a godly one...... thank u dear poet. tony
Dr. Tony, I am so delighted that you enjoyed my poetry. Thank you very much for your visit and inspiring words. Have a wonderful day!
Nature’s quiet serene beauty and atmosphere has power to dip us in meditative state. Excellent poem.
Savita, Thanks a lot for your visit to my poetry page and uplifting comments. All the best!
Bernard, It is great to hear from you. Thank you so much for your visit and your awesome comments. Have a wonderful day!
Well thought out and elegantly crafted with conviction. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Irfanulla.
Chinedu, Thank you very much for your kindly comments on my poem. I truly appreciate your visit. All the best!
By the rainbow colored sand dunes Created by the Martian gusty winds Palms of my hands on my knees And the crown of my head Towards the adorable sky This blissful meditation...lost in silence of the sand dunes i sit and meditate... wonderful nature poem. tony