Three or four repetitions
of a mental picture
of the location
...
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Max, this is stunning! accurately stunning. I too wish I'd written this. Carolynn
A quick slash and twist and it's over. Very, very good job. Wish I had written it.
know the feeling too well Max. Great perceptive expression in your poem. Thanks for sharing. 10 from Tai
Wow. What a splendid poem, especially on the uptake of the ending. Loved it.