Meditation Comments

An eloquent, poetic write, nice meditation

A thief at the start and at the end of the day the said thief became clean, a righteous man. I like the lines particularly the collection of ideas deep rooted in the mind's author. A real meditation indeed. Well done, mate.

O' how the power of meditation transforms. This lovely poem is so inspiring. a 10+++

Great beauty and feeling in some of the stolen lines and the thief was exceptionally daring and cosmic.10+

The power of meditation transformed into poetic words, So well penned!

Your title, essence of the poem and the analogy are so perfect. After reading it, I feel I had just been to a much needed meditation session to shed all the anxieties of my mind and now I feel so light, so free. Your poem has an amazing effect on me. Please keep writing and sharing all your precious creative gems. Needless to say, this deserves a straight 10+.

What a wonderful write on meditation! Everything is covered amusingly: observing breaths to sharpen our faculty to focus, then watching the sensations in the body so that they gradually subside making us lighter, and finally divining the joy and peace of the being! The metaphors are soothing and stunning. Congratulations I give 10++. Thanks

My imagination was floating during my reading of the poem. You took us from the material world into the spiritual How true that our material thirst is never satisfiable no matter how many wells we dig How true that our spriitual life can be endlessly enriched by 'stealing' a bit of moonlight into our soul. The great person you are fully transpires in this poem. Thanks a lot for sharing. Perhaps tonight i will drink a bit of the moonlight. Many, many thanks again for providing this very nice piece of inspiration. Hans