Meditation Comments

I agree with Brie. The last stanza was extraordinary.....very good.........10++++

The last part stuck out in my mind, Very good Thanks for sharing. -Brie

Nice poem with nice ending. Love it,10 for it.

And in the drunken joy, of the sun that sets, I feel myself, fulfilled again. ----- In every poem there is a line or stanza that stands out. This was the one for me.I am in awe of how you describe things, your word usage is best by far.

I award you all 10 and plus if I could for your outstanding contribution to the world of poetry with your lovely phrases and thoughts which are spirtually divine and sustained throughout your thought process. Thank you.................arya

a good meditating poem facing the setting sun...'in the nothing ness of every thing'- a good phrase augmenting the ultimate joyous revelry at the end of wandering...10

nice piece of work..............