Monday, October 16, 2017

Medieval Marriage A Noble Arrangement Comments

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Seraphina rises, eyes red rimmed from absent sleep.

Dawning day begins with monstrous effort
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Bri Edwards 13 September 2018

(cont.) This is a fabulously-written poem, AND brought back such memories [some 'good', some 'bad') of (my) yore. bri :) p.s. if this were any better (the poem) , i'd be tempted to think that Bri Edwards wrote it! ;)

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Lodigiana 14 September 2018

Hi Bri..I just love that you enjoyed this poem! Secretly it is one of my favourites and I remember being totally lost in a bygone time when writing it. If such a thing as reincarnation were true, I am sure that was an era familiar to me..who knows you might have even been a nobleman, a Squire who knows? ! Always appreciate your interesting comments Bri and so pleased this particular one was as good for you to read as it was for me to live within and compose! Xx

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Bri Edwards 13 September 2018

(cont.) quintain noun historical a post set up as a mark in tilting with a lance, typically with a sandbag attached that would swing around and strike an unsuccessful tilter. the medieval military exercise of tilting at a quintain. YES! i played at such a game in my youth! ! ! ! :) i 'went through' 12 squires in 7 months one year. : ( AND i, too, 'lost my childhood' the first time (of 4) that i married. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 13 September 2018

(cont.) interestingly, in a poem i read a little earlier, another poet misspelled monstrous as monsterous, a VERY EASY mistake! and maybe he did it on purpose? Poppet' always in tow and held to her breast as though Never to be let go. ...i 'love' the lines, the spacing, and the rhyme! ! to MyPoemList ASAP! and, if not already done, to my Favorite Poet List. :) (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 13 September 2018

In folk magic and witchcraft, a poppet (also known as poppit, moppet, mommet and pippy) is a doll made to represent a person, for casting spells on that person or to aid that person through magic.....Seraphina may yet receive her 'popp-it', ...on her wedding bed. see she changed gowns, from ruby to blue; perhaps the latter matched her emotions that day? i like flustering, blustering.. ..but i'd guess they were more likely flustered. then again, i was NOT there! (cont.)

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 December 2017

Feeling for warm comfort! Thanks for sharing.

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