Tuesday, June 9, 2009

Medication Comments

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We all want freedom to express ourselves
without all of the complications
give it all a break fights over,
when you receive that hug and kiss
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Sylvester Eaves
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Vincent James Turner 09 June 2009

IF YOU TOOK AWAY SOME OF THE CLUTTER THIS MIGHT EVOLVE INTO A HALF DECENT POEM/RANT, I ALSO THINK THE ENDING OF THE POEM IS BETTER THAN THE OPENING 12 OR SO LINES BEST REGARDS V

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