in life there are hurdles
true deterination required to cross them
but for to long
the hurdles have been to strong
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7 errors, actually. Not that a typo here and there means that much, Matthew, but it's just an indication of how much effort (or lack thereof) you put into crafting your poem.
Six stanzas and six errors. It would look a lot more convincing without them. H
Dear Matthew, If poetry is a reflection of oneself, then I feel your pain. I will say however that no matter how dark or depressed your life is, always find it in you to remember that you have been blessed by God with many gifts - and He'll continue to bless you - acknowledge Him and your blessings. That's when you'll feel like the Phoenix rising out of the ashes. This note to you is proof enough as you have moved me to express my feelings to you - about you as a talented artist and unique individual. Take care and be safe and....God bless. - Lori