Sunday, February 5, 2006

Meant To Be Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

The room is cold,
I’m breaking out in sweat,
Trapped in unending nightmares,
Hell is on my heels,
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Willow Moon Pearce 05 February 2006

I know the feeling well Silva - well thought of poetry........regards......willow

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Willow Moon Pearce 05 February 2006

I know the feeling well Silva - well thought of poetry........regards......willow

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Elya Thorn 05 February 2006

Again very strong in the feeling that the poem expresses, you are able to express it so well, I love the use and combination of words! Also the imagery is great! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Mary Nagy 05 February 2006

What an emotional poem! I just read Adam's poem that had a very similar feeling to it.........(you would probably like it) Very good poem Silver. Sincerely, Mary

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