The foolish bird
Gets tired
Trying to go out of the blue sky;
It may go and go and will die
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So moving with great impact of a love that is part of you, beautiful write! !
Beautiful and well crafted. I can feel the spirit flows...thanks for sharing. A 10.
When in possession, we never know the value of persons or things, but when they slip out of our grasp or go out of our presence, we come to realize the real worth! A nice little poem!
what is good is your song with passionate love of your soul/ great Sayeed god bless u
Touching dear. It was a nice reading, filled with emotion. A nice love poem
2. Perhaps to try to live without love is the only way to find what it truly is? For you, anyway. Many seem to know you can't live without and don't even try.
why try to live without love, if, as you suggest, you can't live without it?
oh dear sayeed, your poem is too emotional. but i believe '' thins aren't always what we seem'' it can help you. well done.