Wednesday, December 9, 2020

Mea Culpa Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nature is always right and I am always wrong,
My fair lady you are a lyric and I am a song,
Your poem had no meters and it has no rimes,
It was my sin and these were my crimes,
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 December 2020

Love is the most precious pearl in your treasure. Mea culpa My Lord! Please let it continue long, Beautiful is your lyric but amazing is my song. When beautiful lyrics combine with a melodious song - the result is an amazing rhythm of love.........Marvellous poem Akhtar Sahab

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Varsha M 10 December 2020

Beautiful muse sir. Awesome lyric and song combi.....well written. You express really well Sir. Beautiful is your lyric but amazing is my song... signature ending. Beautiful.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 December 2020

A magnificent piece of work sir! Extremely well composed..5 stars.

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