Makayla Straight

Makayla Straight

I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
Monday, August 30, 2010

Me Vs. Me Comments

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It is official
I have lost the war
The war that is in my head
So much violence
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Makayla Straight
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Sandy Player 29 December 2012

The inner critic is, as shown in your poem, very powerful; yet it always allows us to make ourselves instead of quietly backing down. Pride is a good explanation. Excellent poem, very engaging to read. -M

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Makayla Straight

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I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
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