They came on the way
One by one, unexpected
On the beginning stage between
That beautiful glossy hilly rocks.
Streams they joined with me soon
So softly, so gently, so clearly.
I was in the mirth of real flow
It was a festival for me, my life
The colourful fantasy of lights around.
My family told you are not alone,
But I sought my way to the realisation
Without depending too much on
Anyone for my self-actualisation.
I did talk to my creator, my God,
Silently loved him to bliss supreme.
I was flowing through his hands
To the misty mornings in those foggy
Days with a flooding mind deep inside
I swirled down in the foamy whirlpool
Yes the journey begins and it finds its ways proceedings. Beautifully written sir. Thank-you for all your comments.
Beautiful poem tracing the beginning of a journey and its smooth course to its final destination foaming and frothing! A 10
My family told, you are not alone, But I sought my way to realisation Without depending too much on Anyone for my self actualisation. This stanza in your poem is revealing your character. wonderful. all those who became great had their own vision without depending on anyone. love this. tony
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I would like to translate this poem
I did talk to my creator, my God, Silently loved him to bliss supreme. I was flowing through his hands To the misty mornings in those foggy Days with a floodding mind deep inside I swirled down in the foamy whirlpools. Exquisit Adore and enjoy..10