Me The River-First Steps Comments

The personification of the river and self Is superb

Marvellous poem with beautiful imageries. The birth of stream has so emotionally been described. deserves more than the top marks

When I was in the womb I heard my mother singing Lullabies, passionate, loving.- - - -what a beautiful image to have of your Mother before you were even born! ! ! ! My daughter recognized my heart beat from when she was in the womb! ! !