Me The River- Blocked Poem by Suresh Kumar EK

Me The River- Blocked

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But the journey was not so easy,
Sharp stones, bulging rocks,
Deep ravines, killing gorges,
All the way it was obstacles.


when I acquired some momentum
They built huge dams across me,
Exploited my waters, tunnelled me,
Produced electricity, dried me up.


What happened really, I couldnt say
For I was in muddy whirlpools of
Pain, vaccum of love, passion and
Power which covered the path from me.

I was sucked into many whirlpools
Suffocated totally in deep waters,
But I kept my head above always with
A life jacket of poetic confidence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 01 September 2020

Lovely poem. I love your life jacket of poetic confidence

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Sk Nambiar 25 December 2020

superb personification

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Sk Nambiar 25 December 2020

And I kept my head above with a jacket of poetic confidence

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Sk Nambiar 25 December 2020

I was in muddy whirlpools of pain, love, passion and power.

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Shaija kt 20 October 2020

I kept my head above... Movement s of poetic inspiration.... Nice

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Varsha M 01 September 2020

But I kep my head above always with A life jacket of poetic confidence.... very well composed sir. Admirations.

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