Tuesday, April 5, 2016

Me The Monster Comments

Rating: 3.9

There've been times in my life
Wretched times
In which I caused people
The ones closest to me
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Mike Smith
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Chan Mongol 19 April 2016

Very thoughtful. Keep it up. Thanks.

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Mike Smith 19 April 2016

Thank you Chan

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Wes Vogler 14 April 2016

sorry about the couplet challenge. Kelly will explain. I am too old to change

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Wes Vogler 14 April 2016

Want some advice? Lose yourself in your writing. You are very creative. If reality is your enemy why then retreat into fiction and entertain us all.

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Kelly Kurt 06 April 2016

But you have the distinct advantage of not only wanting to be aware...But actually being aware of that part of you that also resides in everyone. Nobody is perfect, no one is even close, but you are one step closer by virtue of self awareness and painful honesty. An insightful and brutal piece of writing.

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Mike Smith 06 April 2016

I could argue parts of this, but that wouldn't do anybody any good. Instead I'll graciously accept the compliment. Thanks Kelly

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