Friday, February 19, 2010

Me The Humble Daisy Comments

Rating: 4.0

I sit underneath the Cherry tree,
frozen;  me and time
Held spell bound by her blossoms,
and the sparrows all in a line
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Lillian P.k
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Your Thoughts 19 February 2010

this was very nice and flowed pretty well. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

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