Me Or You! Comments
You were!
And before you
The sun shone for the first time
From the sheer darkness
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thanks, Unnikrishnan, your comments are more brilliant than my poem, you got the point delicately
Lovely writing. Sequential build-up to the dawn of love, "for the first time" in the universe… but, "I have to meet 'me' To let 'me' come" to you. Realisation of self is most important before reaching out to the outer world. Even in love!
Beautiful poem. Full of energy. Top score. And to Myfavourites
Lovely writing. Sequential build-up to the dawn of love, "for the first time" in the universe… but, "I have to meet 'me' To let 'me' come" to you. Realisation of self is most important before reaching out to the outer world. Even in love!
Let me quote-But 'me' before visits 'you' Have to meet another one Until flown By pure love By Purity And refine my heart I have to meet 'me' To let 'me' come! But, I have no idea How long will it last? How many days? How many suns?
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7/19/2025 10:48:01 AM # 1.0.0
An insightful poem of great beauty.