Me, Myself, My Friend Comments

There's the commonplace experience of sibling rivalry but you and your sister have leaped over that sad situation and achieved a most supportive and blessed rapport. You have observed your sister very closely and filled the poem with specific features of her personality which make her so special. The end rhymes give your poem a traditional quality which matches the universality of the bond which unites you two. This poem shows the wonder and health of family life when siblings are motivated by good will. Long may it prevail! !

Lovely piece.i love it