Friday, November 1, 2013

>≫Me, My Bicyle And Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

me and my bicycle
are in a queer relation
at least in the state of running
at high speed it keeps balance
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Abdul Wahab
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 07 November 2013

everything in this universe is set as per the system walk as per the system having high pace at stamina full creates a problem at low stamina energy is conserved and transformed one to another we are forceful at early age and later we keep the forceful mind nice poem 10

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Queeny Gona 05 November 2013

The line of comparission drawn between life and bicycle is so wonderfully expressed in this read. I enjoyed the read!

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 04 November 2013

Nice poem comparing life and bicycle; I could not afford high speed upon putting much efforts I develop back pain; sometimes breathlessness!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 04 November 2013

love this poem and the great comparison.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 04 November 2013

love this poem and the great comparison.

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Heather Wilkins 02 November 2013

in some countries a bicycle is necessary a method of transportation. so ride on dear poet. nice comparison to life. 10+

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Ramesh Rai 01 November 2013

a nice piece.good one. life is like bicycle. lovely write

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