White are pages of life
Until we ink it dark
I'm the author
I choose
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Nice imagery about a man and his equations with time. Thoughtfully configured as under: Hour doesn't seem / In my favor.. ..doesn't.. Mean I'm dead / Forever.
We are author of our life so we should keep sensibly write and live life./// yeah; right the note is; excellently written the poem is
A wonderful poem! Yes time is a free and independent guy.. pragmatic expression! A very creditable piece of work. I adore both the authors for such a nice conceptualization...5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
A well penned poem..... Truly brilliant and splendid....5 stars*****
I think time is in Your favour with Good poetry. Congrats for being the second poet In the world of PH