Sunday, March 23, 2014

Me, Mine... You, Yours... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want you to feel MY kind of love …
The kind you never have to question
The kind you can always depend on
The kind you can trust
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Catherine Hendry
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Khairul Ahsan 30 March 2014

I liked this poem. It's short, simple and honest. 'I want you to want me like I want you Like I can’t live without you Like I can’t breathe without you Like I can’t be without you Like my sheer relevance … Is dependent solely on the existence of you … ' - Honest, emphatic and straight! Very well done. The note touches too. I rated this poem 10/10.

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Catherine Hendry

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