Me In Their Eyes Comments

beautiful.. touching...10+

Your pain is not yours only. It's our pain. Hats off Kelvin for opening the curtain of cruelty.10+++

Beautiful, thank you for your honesty.

The words hears bad to non-nigar. But overall the same is used by different hating-identity relating cast, race, religion etc. etc. Moreover economic imbalance creates such doggish ego to someother. Upper pleases themselves by the stamping sound of boots to the Lowers.... Actually man has not been yet human, just a few think themselves superman... forgive them, they are really deserve of mercy for their childish ego-culture.... Your biography written well..... 10

People who use the power that words can often have to destroy others will one day be engulfed by an all consuming silence where they will have to live with nothing but the sound of their own words. You are not a broken thing, don't let anyone ever make you think that about yourself. Although some scars (both physical and emotional) may still remain, they didn't break you. Someone who can express such a intimate and personal pain so eloquently isn't broken, he's a survivor. ~A fellow survivor~

Kelvin, this is very touching piece. Here shines also your deep honesty as a poet, full of passion and emotion. But what is greatly affirmed in this entry is that in spite of the negative things experienced in childhood, the good thing in a life of a child will never leave the child so long in that dark tunnel there shines a ray of love from one or two in the child's world. I think this makes life so fantastic. I think this makes you or anybody in this story to come out a very strong person purified as gold, only after some burning...

wonderful, facinating the first part shows the vindictiveness in your thoughts.maybe you would become a sociopath. the hardship you had in your life. i hope the happy times for you without loneliness cheers

We should act like real humans, we should be like the honorable souls those the history had seen. We all are from one source. good work Kelvin well done.

Oh, Kelvin! Since I'm sure you didn't write this to recieve sympathy, but for others to have insight into your secret heart, your achievements, the beauty under what others called ugly. Personally, I have had some problems too. But I know that the hardships we go through only make us stronger people. I also know that you, Kelvin, are spectacular, and it's a priviledge that I get to know you. I thank your family with the want to keep you, because I know that I am grateful for your existence. Just hold strong, my sweet friend.

Aw Kelvin, big big cyber soft Stevie hugs. Thank goodness for your grandmother, grandfather and uncle! I wonder do the others realise their errors! It has made you such a strong, creative person and I wish you only happiness from now on. You spilled you heart and shared so much with us! X