Thursday, September 13, 2012

Me For Me Comments

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If i was not rich would you love me
Would you love me on my own
Without all the riches without my thrown
Would you kiss me if i were a toad
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Eindaray Kyaw 15 September 2012

For i would give up everything even the thrown For you to love me and me alone........so beautiful verse your poem's title is so attractive and so are your rhythms... Great job!

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