Me For Me Comments

Nice expression of oneself... Very thoughtful... ^-^

very good you are a very good poet you know what is funny about life you say one mean thing to someone and it really puts them down but if you say one little nice things it can really can enlighten some one's day

Well ok, but focus on the imagery to describe what you see. Try reading my 'life and death surround'. Why not read something redeeming? ? ? ? ~beau golden-POET

first you must find your inner soul, then it teaches the heart to hold all the love that you have inside and makes you want to fly, and to let the world know, that you found your inner soul. A GR8 WRITE

This is a cleverly written poem, Kranthi, one which tells quite effectively one of the basic truths of life. If one is not happy with themself, how can they truly love somone else? First, one must accept what they are and be pleased with it, then you will understand how to love another person. Your final verse was very well written. Carl.

i adore it fantastic poetry

That is so true you must love your self befor anyone else can exspet your parents! ! really well put. I really liked it.

Bible says to love your brother man. Though it; s very hard when people do you wrong.

well, you sure gave the reader a lot 2 think about here lots of though enter this poem creative poem good story told