Saturday, August 10, 2019

Me Bent, She Unrepentant Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bent knees, how we climb up a steep hill,
Bent knees we make amends, ditched by Jill.
Joe when tried this ruse old
Found her still rather cold,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 August 2019

An amazing romantic Limerick sir! Thoroughly enjoyed......................................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 August 2019

Yes, that is what it is, a laughing pill, no prescription. Thanks Dr Swain.

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Jane Campion 10 August 2019

Perfect description of marital displeasure. Thank you dear poet for your comments.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 August 2019

Perfect description, may be, but as a prescription, as remedy pill it has failed.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

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