Thursday, March 12, 2009

Me At End Comments

Rating: 5.0

In voyage of life
From birth to now
I saw many faces
From now to death
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Walterrean Salley 17 December 2009

God will hold all accountable. A wise message to ponder.

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 14 March 2009

We all have roles in our lives however our roles can change. Well expressed peice. I can see you've thought about it. Awesome write.

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Louis Rams 13 March 2009

when you don't answer to yourself, then to who? a very fine piece tenj

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Jacob Gifford 13 March 2009

Some people will Lean twords this poem and some will not very good very well thought out

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Pablo Cruise 13 March 2009

Fine sentiments, Kranthi! !

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Joseph Poewhit 13 March 2009

Sort of like walking shadows peoples lives. Though our path is the key to it staying on the path.

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Eyan Desir 13 March 2009

good rhymes Poetic good work

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 13 March 2009

Very true, It's one own innerself answerable at the end. All of us have a role to play in our lives. Nice poem, Kranthi. Best Wishes Naseer

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Catrina Heart 13 March 2009

Well said Kran! In our voyage of life we must play our role very wise. For our life is only one, God has given us the gift of life so we have the responsibility to take good care of ourself, nurture it and share our blessings to others as well. Our responsibility does not only end to our self but we also have a responsibility to others....and in the end we are only liable to our ownself...........10++++++

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Hockey Fan 12 March 2009

Every soul has free will and affects others by their personality and characteristics is the meaning I get from this poem. You can't control other people because they have free will...you can only control yourself...or...you only have to answer for yourself. I kinda like this poem. Very well writen.10+

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i really, really like it..

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