You leaned over and you kissed me
I felt my knees go weak
You leaned over and you kissed me
I couldn't even speak
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im not so sure about the repetition, but there were a few lines i really enjoyed keep going, i await more
cute. i liked every other line but the 'you leaned over and you kissed me' got tiring after a while. keep at it, you've got potential.