Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Me And You Comments

Rating: 4.8

Avalanche of a thousand dreams,
Engaging, raging at lifes torrent of bad luck,
Like muck it sticks and dries hard,
Like been dealt a bad hand of cards,
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Hazel Durham
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 June 2013

Wonderful poel Hazel, great imagery and very artistic. Siya_! !

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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

lovely poem Hazel. artistic wanderings welds us together. like the thought.

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Owain Glyn 27 May 2013

Enigmatic, full of immense imagery, I love it.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 27 May 2013

I like this poem so much

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Soumita Sarkar 20 May 2013

A good write.............I invite you to read my poems and review them.............thank you.

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Many beautiful lines dat I had to read to d end. Though a complex one... Nice one Hazel ~TT~

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 May 2013

pearls ye chose and put with the dew metaphor very nice diction Again I have to read thank

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Valerie Dohren 30 April 2013

Lovely, thought-provoking poem Hazel, with many inspired lines.

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Yasmin Khan 30 April 2013

I think it's written in a stream of consciousness technique a bit complex thoughts

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 29 April 2013

very moving heart... twisted and melted naturally...Artistic imagery... very well written.... Awesome....

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Dr.subhendu Kar 28 April 2013

Artistic wanderings welds us together, Like the sun greeting us good morning, passinate write by ingenuity,10+, thanks for sharing

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David Wood 27 April 2013

I agree with Lyda, a thought provoking poem that is complex yet straightforward. I like it.

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Paul Brookes 27 April 2013

A complex poem from a complex soul I'm still trying to find who i am I think in the end we are many different people depends on who were with. Well express and written as ever, thanks for sharing BB : O)

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*loved Soul* Christian 26 April 2013

Well written and beautiful.....Thanks for sharing

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