Avalanche of a thousand dreams,
Engaging, raging at lifes torrent of bad luck,
Like muck it sticks and dries hard,
Like been dealt a bad hand of cards,
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lovely poem Hazel. artistic wanderings welds us together. like the thought.
A good write.............I invite you to read my poems and review them.............thank you.
Many beautiful lines dat I had to read to d end. Though a complex one... Nice one Hazel ~TT~
pearls ye chose and put with the dew metaphor very nice diction Again I have to read thank
Lovely, thought-provoking poem Hazel, with many inspired lines.
I think it's written in a stream of consciousness technique a bit complex thoughts
very moving heart... twisted and melted naturally...Artistic imagery... very well written.... Awesome....
Artistic wanderings welds us together, Like the sun greeting us good morning, passinate write by ingenuity,10+, thanks for sharing
I agree with Lyda, a thought provoking poem that is complex yet straightforward. I like it.
A complex poem from a complex soul I'm still trying to find who i am I think in the end we are many different people depends on who were with. Well express and written as ever, thanks for sharing BB : O)
Wonderful poel Hazel, great imagery and very artistic. Siya_! !