Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Me And You Comments

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We are like water
Only you are a waterfall
Your stream is restless and loud
And I am a small creek
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Arta Krasniqi
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Daniel Brick 28 August 2015

Your opening line made me think the two of you were almost identical both being composed of the element of water. Was I ever startled by the differences between you two revealed in the specific images of water each embodies: You are both streams but his is restless and surges forward to fall as a loud waterfall; your is a gently flowing stream, going nowhere in silence, with the rare leaf falling on its unruffled surface. I can only conclude you are telling him, emotionally we are so different your energy would disturb the quiet I need and seek, and those qualities in me would leave you bored, or at least anxious for something b-i-g to happen. But what respect you show for these personality traits. The imagery shows your acceptance of different, even contradictory persons.

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Fabrizio Frosini 27 August 2015

slightly different faces of the same medal.. male/femal.. thanks for sharing

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