Me And You Comments

well done, keep writing 10

well, this is really good i think your mom or dad is a true poet becoz poetic wrds run in the blood and i know you can be a future smart man congratulation in your poetry dear little sweetheart..

an emotionally self relective write...well done

From a critical stanpoint, nice progression and flow. It went from lovestruck to reluctant, to heartbroken very nicely. From a personal stand point I liked it, I connected with it, it was good.

Oh My God...thats amazing well done xxxPEACExxx