I awoke at midnight,
and saw the ray of moon,
was touching my forehead,
with its gentle light.
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A VERY beautiful poem, and highly instructive on creative imagery and careful composition. Thanks!
Beautiful Nilakshi.. That's all I can comment...I read it thrice in a row.
So gelid it is yet so warm. This was the initial plan of the creator and see where we stand. Blessed are those who have the power to fantasize. Kindly go through my poem Moon.
This is absolutely BEAUTY-ful, I will give anything to have a mind that can paint such pictures so vividly.
so beautiful and delightful read indeed and how innocently you have described each word is just beyond explanation..lovely... thank you for sharing love payal
like the moon in the midnight that can light all living things I know you also has an ability to light all people's dark mind..through your poems Great job! !
Beautiful and impressive poem. Thanks for penning.