Tuesday, March 12, 2013

Me And Myself … 1203-2k13 Comments

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As we watch the drifting clouds
Me and myself, a lonesome consign
Together we gaze and gape
woven intricate nature's design
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Yasmin Khan 18 March 2013

Loneliness penetrates in the soul of the poet. Personified beautifully, it is now a companion of him. This lonesomeness is also a blessing to give birth to such poetry. a silent scream unheard so loud echoing somber rip and tatter of a soundless shadowy shroud These lines remind me of Keats’ Heard melodies are sweet, but those unheard Are sweeter; therefore, ye soft pipes, play on; So keep on playing your soft and serene melodies.

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Meena Mustafa 12 March 2013

Great penning. Who can relate better to this poem of loneliness than me :)

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Persian Khushi 12 March 2013

an honest, sad and lonesome scribe. as always an excellent job done. well crafted too.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 March 2013

A wry poem so touchin n creative on loneliness as if! But speaks marvelously to all in fab poetic language soo impressive. Am bac readin writin.

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