Saturday, July 6, 2019

Me And My Shadow Comments

Rating: 5.0

The only thing I can really say is mine
Sticks to me like glue never out of line
From morning till night always in tow
Do we really need it, I mean a shadow.
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Frederick Nellist
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AB Faniki 09 September 2019

Beautifuly done. I enjoyed it is the McCoy an original piece

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 July 2019

the you and the shadow all through a movement of true!

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Tom Billsborough 06 July 2019

A highly entertaining and original poem. I enjoyed this very much. It was very witty and pleasing to the ear. I think I'll shadow it into my favourites' list!

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Freddie, 06 July 2019

Thanks Tom, I must get round to reading yours.

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Beautiful piece, I sense a content depth and sadness at the same time.

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Frederick Nellist

Frederick Nellist

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