Friday, April 4, 2014

Me And My Mom Comments

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Me and my mom...
We're like peanut butter and jelly.
But sometimes we're different,
Like shrimp and cookies.
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Roseann Shawiak 02 September 2015

Excellent expression at such a young age, innocent and pure poetically. Rhythm was very good back then also, you are a natural poet. Just keep writing, at least one poem every day! Thank you for sharing this beautiful tribute to your Mom, very touching. RoseAnn

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Malik-seven Navarre 05 September 2015

Thank you RoseAnn for your feedback on my poems =) I never really thought about writing poetry I just did it when I felt like it or rather when I felt it. But now I will try to write one everyday to better myself ^_^

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