Monday, March 1, 2010

Me And My Mask Comments

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Everyday i wear mask,
considering what others ask,
that of a wife, mother, sister and daughter,
changing it from hour to hour.
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manju shree
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Sastra Gopal 01 March 2010

great work... this poem surely depicts the confused identity of a woman

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Ellery Lim 01 March 2010

bery true, but not very well elaborated. I agree with it but at points there are very strong messages conveyed but not expressed. Where am i in these? lost in the divided loyalties, torn in different worlds. i believe i understand and i know it is very meaningful. so dont limit it to a three liner point. all in all,7 for you

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