Saturday, June 20, 2015

Me And My Love Comments

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Me and my love are integral
can not be imagined ignoring one

If i am the sun she is the rays
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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 20 June 2015

The flow at some point was awesome, but I would've loved it better if it had ended with a rhythm as those of the two line stanzas.

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