Me And My Folks Comments

i try to be patient, i don't hate them in fact, they're all that i've got nothing else in my life is worth living for but still, the pain of neglect is worse than being shot a truth an amzing truth. how at this tender age you have known! 10marks. shan

you have remarkbly written the poem..... is it self portrait ........ what every it is... a good write........

excellently expressed....superb flow which was very natural...'neglect is worse than being shot' very deep words...i can very well identify with the situation...is it work pressure or mind set...a lot of families lose to needs...you are blessed with creativity..open your wings and fly high....good luck